There it was, glistening in all its wonder, I had finally found El Dorado! The fountains flowed with precious golden liquid, and it was so bright I could barely see in front of me. The architecture was amazing. A shining city hidden, here, within the forest. Cryptic glyphs inscribed on the bright yellow walls, as mysterious as the mythic city itself. It would take years to decipher it all! So many explorers had tried and failed before me, to the point that it has been deemed impossible. Now, however, I have finally discovered its location. The months deciphering the clues were all worth it. With all this, I could be rich! I located the legendary city of gold!
The second comma in the first sentence should be an exclamation mark.What is the special golden liquid that you are talking about? Is there a golden liquid that it is precious?
ReplyDeleteYou said that it takes years to decipher the location, but why did you say that you took months to decipher. And what is the location that you are talking about? Are the code and the architecture in the same place?
Rating....B